great animation, but story needs work

I could follow everything that was happening, but it took too much of my own acceptance than a good story should. With your level of animation skill, you need to really put it to use with a good story.

okay, there's a big scarecrow trying to eat crows. Why? It doesn't have to be much. A bolt of lightning that brings him to life and enrages him is still an explanation. What we have is nothing, we jump right in (that's okay sometimes, too..but that's something you usually do to keep the viewer guessing about what they are seeing)

then a little scarecrow, who likes crows. They make funny faces at each other. Not sure why, but again the animation was solid. Good expressions and cute scene.

Then they all encounter each other, and no one seems to like one another. I'll accept it blindly, again

Cool effects at the end. Particularly the dissipation of the crow swarm.

And then the final scene. Little scarecrow on his back.. not a very strong ending. Leaves you with a "that's the end?" type of feeling. A story either needs to end completely, or by giving the viewer a sense that something is actually going to happen after the curtains close.

8/10! I hope to see more from you and really think about the storytelling and writing! It's important! :)

gas!!

that was really really good!

WHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT!?

I-I-I-I-I-I---

controls ruined it

Woulda been 100x better if the controls matched. I don't know why you chose to reverse the sides

beat it

very fun, challenging, artistic, and cool ending :O

Fun..until it glitches!

Very good game, but could have used a few improvements. I encountered a glitch where I could only shoot one arrow and had to switch to a different weapon, then switch back to the crossbow before I could fire again. This happened in the middle of the squid battle, so I just gave up. The bosses take a little too long, especially since it's using the same attack over and over.

Great job guys, keep it up!

DUDE?

were were you thinking?

Yes!

it's 100 rounds. it's 100 rounds. it's 100 rounds. it's 100 rounds.

adequate

this is so good that it deserves a spot in my Geometry Wars-playing soundtrack.
Previously spots were reserved solely for goa psy, so that's saying something.
gj
keep it up
nothin' gonna break yo stride
5/5 respect